Can you rewrite the following sentence? What's the error?

32. She is the girl I talked to her yesterday. She has a dog that I played with it yesterday.

answer: do not remention a previously written element in your sentence
She is the girl I talked to yesterday. ✅
She is the girl I talked to her ❌ (the girl =her)
The dog that I played with.✅

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Can you rewrite the following sentence? What's the error?

33. My friends told me that they will help me out of that big trouble.

ans: when reporting a sentence with the modal will and the reporting verb (here it's told) is in the past form you should change will to would.
They told me that they would help me.

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