14 Read the rubric and underline the key words. Then, write your essay.
Your teacher has asked you to write a story which must end with the words: "They decided to be more careful next time." Write your story (120 -180 words).
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Written by: Mozhgan
"Serious mishap"
The weather was so gloomy that no none could see the ship leaving. The sea was turbulent and stormy so that nobody was able to set a sail in such terrible weather. Generally no sailors put himself into that dreadful storm; however, there were some intrepid sailors willing to help their coworkers even if they were killed and lost in the sea.
The Smiths had embarked towards the sea one day before the storm. It was calm and placid, however. Finished their work, they wanted to come back to their town so as to reach in a safe house before storm. Wandering on the sea during horrible storm for one day, the father was too hopeless to think wisely. He whispered slowly " no chance to survive, it is our destiny to die on the sea".
On the contrary, Andy, the youngest son, thought positively and knew that their friends would come to rescue them just in the nick of the time. All of a sudden, they noticed a gleam of hope by hearing their friends' voices from distance. Screaming SOS, they called them constantly with excited shriek.
In the end, they were rescued and all were extremely delighted about that. Notwithstanding, the Smiths decided to be careful the next time that they want to go sailing and not to be imprudent when it comes to their lives.
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Your teacher has asked you to write a story which must end with the words: "They decided to be more careful next time." Write your story (120 -180 words).
🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰
Written by: Mozhgan
"Serious mishap"
The weather was so gloomy that no none could see the ship leaving. The sea was turbulent and stormy so that nobody was able to set a sail in such terrible weather. Generally no sailors put himself into that dreadful storm; however, there were some intrepid sailors willing to help their coworkers even if they were killed and lost in the sea.
The Smiths had embarked towards the sea one day before the storm. It was calm and placid, however. Finished their work, they wanted to come back to their town so as to reach in a safe house before storm. Wandering on the sea during horrible storm for one day, the father was too hopeless to think wisely. He whispered slowly " no chance to survive, it is our destiny to die on the sea".
On the contrary, Andy, the youngest son, thought positively and knew that their friends would come to rescue them just in the nick of the time. All of a sudden, they noticed a gleam of hope by hearing their friends' voices from distance. Screaming SOS, they called them constantly with excited shriek.
In the end, they were rescued and all were extremely delighted about that. Notwithstanding, the Smiths decided to be careful the next time that they want to go sailing and not to be imprudent when it comes to their lives.
Join us on weekdays at 7 pm IRDT
#writing #exercise #n62 @sirjimmy